There are a lot of things I would say differently:
I wouldn't say '¿puedo traerte una bebida?' but '¿puedo comprarte una bebida?' which translates to can I buy you a drink?; I'd skip the 'conmigo' in '¿quieres bailar conmigo?'; I'd say 'hielo' (ice) instead of iceberg which is an english word and 'témpano de hielo' which is the actual translation is too long. I'd also say 'bésame' which is another translation of kiss me, but you might have noticed I'd do something different than /u/Luzaleugim so there are multiple ways to do all of those.
The only thing that is actually "wrong" with this phrases is that they scream "I'm not a native speaker, and I don't have much experience yet" which might or might not give you bonus points when flirting. All of them, except the iceberg one are correct, so it does it's job as a beginner's guide.
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What are some Spanish pickup lines?
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Pro tip: successfully flirting and using pickup lines are contradictory.
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Queres coger puta. Works 100% of the times
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Mami, estás como el queso italiano.. ricotta
Gets them every time
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Just say te voy a coger works most the time
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You can search for “piropos”
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in spain we don't say 'do you love me?' we say 'punto y si me lío' and i think its beautiful
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Mmm that's a hard one. I think you should tell me what tone you want to use. I think flirting in Spanish can be veeeery lame (like lines took out of a soap opera) and sexist lol. But if you give me examples or a scenario I can help you.
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Para Coquetear/Cortejar/Ligar/Echar los perros (slightly vulgar).
Puedes usar:
Eres Linda/Bella/Escultural/Guapa/Hermosa/Primorosa/Atractiva/Preciosa.
You are (Choose one, all about Physical beauty).
Eres Encantadora/Dulce/Agradable/Adorable.
You are (Choose one, Nice personality).
Edit: Those are the most common words to compliment the beauty of a girl.
"Culo" can work as the cheeks too, not only the butthole. If you wanted to say "I want that booty" you could say, "Quiero esas nalgas" (not the "flirtiest" option) "Quiero ese culo" or "Quiero ese culito" (culito being the closest translation to booty)
What a weird yet interesting question that was
Edit: Friendly reminder for everyone, do not say that kind of phrases to women who don't want to hear them or you're not confident enough with
I know, I know, it's a cliche to only learn the vulgar things to say, but a friend of mine keeps getting me to flirt in Spanish with this gorgeous waiter he's friends with but doesn't tell me what the things he wants me to repeat mean so I don't trust him lmao. I'm not gonna say unknown stuff in the middle of a room full of native Spanish speakers! So another friend of mine decided it would be fun to teach me sexy and lovey Spanish - but actually telling me what they mean lol. I thought it would be fun to tell him I picked some up on my own lol. And evidently our first two lessons, I didn't absolutely butcher your language, thankfully!
If it helps, I'm a woman who primarily dates men, so I guess the things I'm likely to say to them. Don't be afraid to go too soft, sweet, or too dirty, it's all fun!